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Old 06-27-2017, 08:53 AM   #20
jeranx
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Hi Luke. The last version isn't there for the moment. Speaking of the previous one,
to my taste, it sound's very nice. The mix looks to be ok.
Honestly, I have a problem with the "clap thing".
Your kick is really good. As someone says, you have to keep this shaker for the atmosphere, and I think with a honest snare, maybe a smooth one, you'll have the thing ok.
To me the claps doesn't look so "in the rhythm" and their sound looks a little cheap.

At last, maybe a little more things in the middle to avoid some monotony.

That's a pure subjective opinion but I think you asked so. Finally, for me, it's a very cool piece that needs a few things to be really great. Like your style.

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