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Old 01-02-2013, 10:06 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by morgon View Post
Yes good i really like it, and now not 'but', an interesting tweak imo would be to 'assert' the vocal a tad more, hey you can do that when youre really in tune as you are here,let it fly! no need to be oversensitive with it, the song and content already got us convinced, a bit more [for the want of a better word]'aggro' will be not only be forgiven but appreciated,no need to be tentative, you got it!
Morgon..... if you check this thread again I did do some more takes on the vocal just to try some different things and see what you think.
I really only redid the last verse to the end of the song. The beginning part I want to sound 'reflective' and subdued for lack of better words. The middle verse/chorus/bridge build a little. I left those parts as you had originally heard. The last part of the song is where all the 'frustration' lets go.
I tried to let it fly anyway :-) At least as far as I can fly at this time ;-)

Thanks for your input and advice.
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