Old 03-20-2017, 12:42 AM   #1
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I am entering a contest to make a metal cover of an 80s song that sucked. Please critique my first draft:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-lint...metal-cover-v4
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Old 03-20-2017, 01:51 AM   #2
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Thomas Dolby sucked? You philistine!
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hmm.. is that Glenn Fricker's contest from Spectremedia?

Good luck dude!

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hmm.. is that Glenn Fricker's contest from Spectremedia?

Good luck dude!

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Correct!
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Your vocals get off key in a few spots and the "crunch" drops out of the rhythm guitar track during the "I don't believe it, there she goes again...." section. Other than that, that is a bad ass track. I love hearing a song re-done in a genre that I don't think would work and it turns out killer. Great job on this.
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Old 03-22-2017, 03:50 PM   #6
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Your vocals get off key in a few spots and the "crunch" drops out of the rhythm guitar track during the "I don't believe it, there she goes again...." section. Other than that, that is a bad ass track. I love hearing a song re-done in a genre that I don't think would work and it turns out killer. Great job on this.
Thanks dude! I agree on both points. Will try to improve and post an update.
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