The Ear of Dr Yes - Beautiful Humans

[maxdembo]

Still finishing this one up, trying to upload a significantly different demo once every few days or so until its finished. Seems damn close to done to me!

I'm feeling quite proud of parts of this. A sin I know, but I sin so very rarely

https://soundcloud.com/ear/beautiful-humans-demo-4

Anything any one thinks the track 'needs', please feel free to speak up.



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[ElCongelador]

Quite brilliant! The only criticism I have is that the first intro (is it an intro?) part (up to ~ 0:40) seems a bit drawn out to me and falls behind the quality of rest of the piece.

[maxdembo]

Originally Posted by ElCongelador

Quite brilliant! The only criticism I have is that the first intro (is it an intro?) part (up to ~ 0:40) seems a bit drawn out to me and falls behind the quality of rest of the piece.

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'm not entirely sold on the "intro". The track changes so much by 1:30 that I'm considering deleting the whole section...

I'll keep it under consideration, for sure.

[ElCongelador]

I like 0:40 to 1:30. Just that section would serve as a compelling intro.

[maxdembo]

Thanks. Taken under serious consideration.

I'm seeing if I can 'do' anything to those parts first to make em more worthy of inclusion, and if I cant do it quite quickly, I'm cutting the section

[maxdembo]

Cant believe I never posted this!

Heres the video to go with the final track... The track is likely one of my finest pieces of work!