Cool!
I've only dabbled a bit in foley, so take this for what it's worth (not too much
).
The sounds themselves and the timings were good.
I thought the dynamics were a bit off - the quiet sounds were too loud in comparison to the louder ones. Also, there was a bit of proximity effect on some quieter sounds that took me out of believing they are part of the film, as they sounded like they were next to my ear.
The music sounded top notch though. Really great job on that. The timing of the music to the film was good too.
The film itself was pretty good. I know the theme was repletion, but I still think a bit more variety of shots as it went on might have held my interest a bit more. I've seen many more far worse short films, that's for sure.
Good job overall though, I don't want this to sound overly critical, please take the above as constructive.