Come Talk to Me is a new song I'm working on: it needs a better mix and mastering (i.e. pseudo-mastering is all I can do).
I don't have good monitors so please let me know what it sounds like on your side. If you can critique and suggest some edits that would nice. Do you recommend some EQ or volume boosts/cuts, or anything else?
Thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/consciousgrooves/cometalk-to-me
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Song topic:
What if you met, for just a brief moment, the most amazing spiritual being that was made of pure boundless consciousness. While you could not see this being you could feel its power, presence and love, and communicate with telepathically. This experience would be so overwhelming and beyond anything you had experienced in your lifetime. It would next to impossible to explain.
If you had to write a song in regards to this event what would be the lyrics?
This is what I came up with:
(note: some parts are in French, as with all my songs, sorry about that)
COME TALK TO ME
Conscious Grooves
Em-G-A-G (x2)
One of the things that I contemplate is what I think you are
I tell myself I need to know the mystery but I can’t
Pour croire en toi j’ai essayé l’effort est demeuré total
L’écart était trop grand l’affaire me tourmentait le mental
Em-G-A-G (x2)
Patiently in many ways got all the time in the world
It would be nice for me to find so I can free my mind
CHORUS
Bm-D-A-Bm
Going to places in meaningful ways
The search is forever, the questions remain
C- Bm- C- Bm
I don’t need to follow delusions of the mind
C-A-B
So why don`t you come talk to me
Em-G-A-G (x2)
Show me now that you care I’m waiting here in the dark
Can’t you see I’m ready to bear the shining light the spark
J’ai l’impression que tu m’évite le doute s’est installé
La certitude se détériore ma conviction s’égare
Em-G-A-G (x2)
They told me now that I was lost in all the things I thought
I needed to turn my life around so you can mystify
CHORUS ---
Break - Em-G-A-G (x4)
CHORUS