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Old 10-20-2014, 07:11 PM   #1
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Default Wrapped With Love - Christmas Tune - Help Appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/landslide-vic...pped-with-love


Got the basics and built a framework around it.

Lyric idea is along the lines of

Underneath the tree,
Wrapped with love by me

also ....

Remember years ago,
Wrapped from head to toe,
Didn't care about the cold,
Playing in the snow.

That's the general idea / theme for the lyrics.

Really appreciate some feedback and possibly some advice.

Thanks

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Old 10-20-2014, 11:39 PM   #2
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The piano playing is really good. The bass sound (more prominent near the end) is also really good. I hope the stringy synth sound is the placeholder for the vocals - the tone sounds wintery but a little on the cheesy side, I think!

Sounds like a lot of work went into the drums... they sound good - but somehow break the 'suspension of disbelief' every once in a while... the just sound 'programmed' to me in a couple of spots.
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Old 10-21-2014, 02:59 PM   #3
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Thanks for the feedback.
This isn't set in stone, I'm sure it'll change as it develops - re: the stringy synth.
Still working on the lyrics.

I don't mind cheesy, it's a Christmas tune !!
And I'm having a nightmare trying to find the right sleigh bell sound.

I'll look at the drums.

Thank you very much.

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