Old 08-19-2016, 07:43 AM   #1
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*Aural Warning*- The vocals contained in this song sound like shit !

Anybody want to have a go at the vocals for this track ??

So besides my swine mating call vocal performance there's something(or many things)that need attention, I humbly request opinions on what thing(s) are in need and ideas on how to rectify said things.

It is now safe to proceed. Enjoy !!

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Old 08-20-2016, 10:40 AM   #2
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Cool rock song. Come on, the vocals aren't that bad!!

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Old 08-21-2016, 12:12 PM   #3
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yea - i agree with Hugo. I don't think these vox are bad... there's some kind of doubling/efx that sounds kind of cool.. like an old Bowie tune. i think you could almost bring them up a little and not hurt the mix.

the more i listen, this definitely has a late 70s vibe. maybe English, late 70s hard rock.

dig the solo at the end!
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Old 08-22-2016, 03:23 AM   #4
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I agree it reminded me of bowie
I also think the vocals should be higher, i quite liked them. If you do that then maybe it wont feel like the rhythm guitar takes up most of the mix space (which i kinda felt, but to some extent that is the genre). I also liked the 1st. guitar solo, but personally I would work a bit more on the composition of it. The second gtr. solo was awesome, would have liked some more volume on that second solo guitar (?)at the second solo.

Just some first listen subjective opinions
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Old 08-22-2016, 05:00 AM   #5
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ah cmon man, it aint that bad, I like your tone quite a bit..

And yeah, it reminds me a lot of 70's metal, which aint a bad thing ')
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Old 08-22-2016, 08:08 AM   #6
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Love the guitar tones!! Rockin tune and the vox are fine imo...
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Old 08-23-2016, 01:13 PM   #7
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Cool rock song. Come on, the vocals aren't that bad!!

cheers
lol ... Thanks Hugo

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yea - i agree with Hugo. I don't think these vox are bad... there's some kind of doubling/efx that sounds kind of cool.. like an old Bowie tune. i think you could almost bring them up a little and not hurt the mix.

the more i listen, this definitely has a late 70s vibe. maybe English, late 70s hard rock.

dig the solo at the end!
I know a lot of my tunes come off as dated.... late 70's ...... hmmm that's 38 yrs +/- (sigh)

lol

Thanks Mark

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I agree it reminded me of bowie
I also think the vocals should be higher, i quite liked them. If you do that then maybe it wont feel like the rhythm guitar takes up most of the mix space (which i kinda felt, but to some extent that is the genre). I also liked the 1st. guitar solo, but personally I would work a bit more on the composition of it. The second gtr. solo was awesome, would have liked some more volume on that second solo guitar (?)at the second solo.

Just some first listen subjective opinions
Thanks for the listen and input !!!

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ah cmon man, it aint that bad, I like your tone quite a bit..

And yeah, it reminds me a lot of 70's metal, which aint a bad thing ')
Thanks !!!

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Love the guitar tones!! Rockin tune and the vox are fine imo...
Cool thanks for checking it out !!

So I tweeked the mix a bit and tried to incorporate the ideas and suggestions offered. I think it is sounding better, still dated but better ~

the link has been updated to new mix

Thanks guys !!!

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