Too short! I would like to hear more of this! lovely synth-wavey vibes
I really dig the arps starting around 0:40! I think you can expand on these filtered synths more without adding additional layers. This would also help on adding more lenght to the track. Altough the synths starting on 1:15 are very nice as well.
The track could to with an additional shaker (or any other perc) swinging in the background to drive the track further up, like a 16th shaker/High hat. A proper break (with a few ethereal choirs/strings) to build up tension over a longer period of time would also be nice. this would heighten the impact when all the elements are coming back (aka "the drop").
Overall, i really dig it! Great work!
PS: I would really love to remix your track and try give you my take on your material.