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OPI
04-22-2016, 01:00 PM
This is a quick tune i made.

Let me know how it sounds. Im forced to mix on some hyped speakers at the moment.

Thanks.


https://soundcloud.com/toy-gun/come-closer

jopatius
04-22-2016, 01:52 PM
around 0:35 getting interesting
0:53 the main melody sound -
surprising, but not in a good way after all, although I had to think of it until 1:30

1:59 the main melody sound is actually so irritating that it could have some potential as "so irritating you want to hear it again", as many number ones have been

but then it ended just when I was waiting how high the level of irritation can go.
It did not conform to the basic song structure for hits - make it conform (you know I mean the intro, verse1, chorus1, verse2 chorus2, breakdown, double chorus, outro) and who knows what you could have here!

OPI
04-22-2016, 02:32 PM
Haha thanks... (I think)

As for the melody, yes it's irritating. That's kinda what I was going for ;) just a fun tune for me to make.
In terms of structure, a double chorus sounds scary. But I will try it to see if it's not too much. Thanks for the feed back. Does the mix sound ok?

OPI
04-22-2016, 08:15 PM
I updated the link with a little less bass and a db or two off the lead.

OPI
04-24-2016, 05:45 AM
Anybody else?