View Full Version : Looking for opinions/comments/contributions on song

08-24-2010, 03:41 AM

I'm looking for feedback on mix quality, suggestion for improvements and if you want collaborations in adding and improving parts.

I could be interested in particular in backing vocals and guitar strums.


Everything composed, arranged and mixed in REAPER, voice recording excluded.

Thanks a lot,

08-24-2010, 04:36 AM
link doesnt work here

08-24-2010, 04:44 AM
Right click... "save as..." works in firefox here.

Direct click seems to trigger media player or similar cr*p.

- Mario

08-27-2010, 06:43 PM
The link worked for me--opened an embedded windows media player.

The mix: the vocals seem too low; both the lead and backing vocals. The instrument mix is fine, except that the piano at 4:40 seems to come in too loud to me (the delicate piano part sounds as loud or louder than the thumpy synth and drum parts right before it).

If you want help with guitar strums, send me a pm and let me know what you're looking for and any instructions you have about structure/key/etc of the song. I can help, or at least give you something to listen to and use or discard as you wish.

08-28-2010, 06:12 AM
Hi flatpickle,

thank you very much for your feedback.

I'm currently evaluating other contributes I received, but I'll surely contact you if I need more or more appropriate things.


- Mario