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Originally Posted by paulheu
Has much better cadence IMO
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I had a swing/shuffle rhythm in mind when I wrote it... the words seem to fit okay into a shuffle..
don't know about the repetition... i'll think about it, may have to junk the song, but i'll record it in that shuffle beat and you can see if it fits okay, and see if the repetition is too much to deal with
about posting at kompoz... I don't think you know what my intentions are so you don't really know what's suitable for me ... but thanks for the suggestion
as far as I can tell, somebody in my position cant do much... about all you can do is make a more-or-less token effort to make the song accessible... they've got a chance at soudcloud... if they're good enough, they'll survive...
if they're not good enough to survive... well... too bad
maybe I'm a musical darwinist