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Old 08-30-2010, 04:08 AM   #2
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hey,

some nice sounds you got there! There are some issues, though (I hope you don't mind me being honest. Everything else is not gonna be of use for you).

First, I hear some timing issues: you partially tend to play to fast and run away, like in the muted clean part, and especially when the high gain part begins.
The drums are too dry, I'd give them more room. Some more changement/varation would be good, too. Keep on! Ah, and what about the bass. Is there any? :-)

cheers,
m
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