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Old 04-14-2010, 08:29 AM   #2
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I like the song a lot and the mix is very good. You've got a nice sliding double-stop hook between verses. I think that a simple 3 or 4 note guitar licks bracketing the phrases in the verses could really lift this song to the next level - perhaps something like Neil Young might do. By the way, I find the vocal to be quite appealing even though you are pushing your range limits.

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