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Old 11-14-2017, 05:38 PM   #4
grandmogul
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Hi Bart,

a nice little tune and it sounds really fine. Sung very well with a fantastic voice! I have 2 little remarks on it:

I kinda stumbled a bit over the sleigh bell just before the first beat of the tom in the very beginning. You have some reverb on it, but the sound totally breaks off with the first tom-beat. Maybe it would be a bit smoother for the listener, if you let the reverb tail of it ring through.

The other thing is the bell popping up in the right channel at 0:41 (and later) - imho it's a bit too prominent and leaves a sudden hole in high frequencies on the left side. Maybe turning it down a bit would help, and/or broadening its stereo base, so that some of it is perceptible on the left side, too.

But - all in all it was fun to listen to and left me with a smile. And as long as there are earbuds, the risk of listening at work should be manageable

Greetz from Cologne
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