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10-23-2017, 06:42 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: South Wales
Posts: 369
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Unfiltered...first song in about a decade :o
Now bear with me, I haven't made any real music beyond little ditties for around 10 years now, probably about the time i stopped posting. Lacking inspiration I just couldn't come up with anything...that and having had some surgery, wasn't really up to singing...had to relearn how to use my voice properly haha
Anyway, this is a song that probably describes how most of us feel at some point in our lives....and yes, I know it's repetitive, and has no chorus...but after such a long break I'm pretty pleased with how it turned out.
https://soundcloud.com/schtufbox/unfiltered
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10-24-2017, 04:19 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Essex, England.
Posts: 561
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hi, can't offer a proper music critique but I liked it enough to listen all the way through, kinda kept me interested to hear it all. other tracks nice too.. dave
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Music at http://soundcloud.com/fixerdave
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10-24-2017, 12:39 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: South Wales
Posts: 369
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Thanks Dave
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10-27-2017, 05:24 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Nov 2008
Posts: 167
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Gave it a listen. Sounded pretty good on just my phone speaker. I knew there wasnt one, but i was left wanting a chorus. Other than that, the vocal timing seemed to be a little off the beat, esp in the first verse, but maybe that's your style. The acoustic sounded great!
Sam
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10-28-2017, 04:29 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2016
Posts: 45
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Quote:
Originally Posted by asharin
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That had to feel GREAT to record! Totally dig it. Not every song needs to be a structured verse/chorus/verse. Love the vibe.
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10-30-2017, 05:44 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: South Wales
Posts: 369
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sammartin23
Gave it a listen. Sounded pretty good on just my phone speaker. I knew there wasnt one, but i was left wanting a chorus. Other than that, the vocal timing seemed to be a little off the beat, esp in the first verse, but maybe that's your style. The acoustic sounded great!
Sam
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Hey, thanks, I listened again after reading and you're right, when sequencing the vocals I must placed the vocal track for the first verse a half second early, fixed it now but not uploaded to soundcloud (yet) Good ears, I didn't really notice until you pointed it out!
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10-30-2017, 05:45 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: South Wales
Posts: 369
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Animal Rescue
That had to feel GREAT to record! Totally dig it. Not every song needs to be a structured verse/chorus/verse. Love the vibe.
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It did, and now I feel I might actually have inspiration to keep going...now I just need to find the talent to go with lol
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10-30-2017, 05:49 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: South Wales
Posts: 369
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Deleted and re-uploaded with timing errors fixed, thanks sammartin23
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10-30-2017, 06:43 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Nov 2008
Posts: 167
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Glad to help. Looking forward to the next one!
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11-06-2017, 09:17 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Nov 2017
Posts: 44
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I really liked the song but I would enjoy it more if the vocals cut better through the mix (I'm no mixing engineer though)
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11-07-2017, 06:40 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Aug 2017
Posts: 49
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I like it, agree the vocals might be just a tad more clear.
I was getting a Roger Waters vibe from it.
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