Hi all,
Working on an Alternative Rock song idea. So far I have written the basic song licks, 1st verse and chorus vocals. I think it has a Velvet Revolver feel to it. Feedback welcome on what I have so far:
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/whiplash-rev1
WHIPLASH
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
Drop me off here
Won’t go on your ego trip
Hope you enjoy the ride
You fooled me once
Behind with your piston grip
Jekyll changed to Hyde
You won the game
I took the blame
Payback will come
From those that you maim
I will enjoy
Watching you fall
Fall from the sky
Fallin’ aflame
I think it's gonna end for you badly
Route you're going, you're gonna crash
Kick me down, crawl on me, chasin' madly
Power control, gives you whiplash
Kick me down, crawl on me
Gives you whiplash
Power control
Gives you whiplash
Kick me down, crawl on me
Gives you whiplash
Took a bad route
Now take the backlash
VERSE 2 (Pending)
I think it's gonna end for you badly
Route you're going, you're gonna crash
Kick me down, crawl on me, chasin' madly
Power control, gives you whiplash
Kick me down, crawl on me
Gives you whiplash
Power control
Gives you whiplash
Kick me down, crawl on me
Gives you whiplash
Took a bad route
Now take the backlash