What Happened to the girl?

bob · 06-05-2018, 03:52 AM

A new track from the makeaguitarnoise studio.A mystery suspense tune with no ending.Did the angel save her??

https://soundcloud.com/makeaguitarno...-to-the-girl-1

bob · 06-06-2018, 03:54 AM

anyone?what happened to her?

bob · 06-08-2018, 12:55 PM

new improved version with angelic ending.yes its a fine art music making

https://soundcloud.com/makeaguitarnoise/what-happened-to-the-girl-1

karbomusic · 06-08-2018, 02:21 PM

I like it. The only thing that caught me off guard is the wispy and whispery sounds (especially the beginning) are a little too crispy in that 8-12k range. Gentle high shelf roll of would fix it if you wanted to mess with it.

bob · 06-08-2018, 02:32 PM

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Originally Posted by karbomusic

I like it. The only thing that caught me off guard is the wispy and whispery sounds (especially the beginning) are a little too crispy in that 8-12k range. Gentle high shelf roll of would fix it if you wanted to mess with it.

Yes its a little too shrill.Ill have another look at that.thanks

karbomusic · 06-08-2018, 05:09 PM

I dig the song and concept.

bob · 06-09-2018, 09:56 AM

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Originally Posted by karbomusic

I like it. The only thing that caught me off guard is the wispy and whispery sounds (especially the beginning) are a little too crispy in that 8-12k range. Gentle high shelf roll of would fix it if you wanted to mess with it.

carried out you suggestion.high shelf roll on the whispers.

karbomusic · 06-12-2018, 05:48 AM

That's definitely better.