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01-14-2018, 12:57 PM
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Shattered : New track
Last edited by OPI; 06-17-2018 at 11:18 AM.
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01-16-2018, 09:26 AM
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Update the link, forgot to master it hehe
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01-21-2018, 11:04 AM
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Bummppp, would like some feedback if willing
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01-21-2018, 03:11 PM
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ha.. the detuned guitar is brilliant!!
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01-23-2018, 12:51 PM
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Very catchy, and the chorused/detuned guitars give it a very hazy, summer afternoon vibe. I like it.
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01-24-2018, 02:52 PM
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Okayy. Thanks guys. Anything you would change?
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01-29-2018, 02:02 PM
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Having a hard time coming up with anything to change. I might break it down more - have a drum break instead of the 1/4 notes high pitched whistles or whatever you want to call that sound, or add a drum break to make it a bit longer.
The song sounds like day-drinking in a sunny location, probably LA, likely SoCal, at the very least, somewhere tropical. Maybe it's fun day-drinking, or maybe it's depressed day-drinking, I'm not sure which. Probably the latter, given the melancholy that comes through in the title, tempo, and warbly guitars.
It's a nice little slice with a catchy hook. You could make it more in-your-face but I don't think that really fits the mood. The changes that are there, all flow very well. You can tell it's a different part of the same song, but it's not like the Celine/Broadway key modulation where you get slapped in the face with the change, and that's a good thing that it's mellow.
So, yeah.
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02-03-2018, 05:34 PM
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Thanks Reason.
I have tried mixing it a bit more aggressive but like you said, it didnt fit the feel.
I may try mixing up the drums a bit though, thanks dude.
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02-03-2018, 05:36 PM
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02-03-2018, 08:22 PM
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Another beautiful soundscape Luke, I like it a lot. The final version has been eq'd higher than the OP version? [I listened to both] Maybe the final version is slightly treble imo but still an impressive track, cheers.
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02-25-2018, 09:45 AM
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I would aggree morgan. Fixed the highs now : )
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02-25-2018, 08:02 PM
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great vibe!! really been enjoying your tunes lately! nice job!
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02-26-2018, 01:08 AM
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Thanks alot mschuster. Ive finally been getting into music again. Im also happy again lol
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03-06-2018, 07:33 AM
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Sounds great!
It oddly enough reminds me a bit of Boards of Canada, despite not sounding that much like them. It's probably the subtle detune on the guitar doing this. Awesome
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03-06-2018, 09:56 AM
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Thanks dude.
Yeah it does have that vibe. Thanks for listening man
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06-25-2018, 02:46 PM
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I like the mood and the feel. Only thing I am biased against is the electronic sounding drums, but that's just me. If it had a real drum kit instead, I would call it finished. Musically it is very compelling overall.
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