Hi Shane
These are my feedback notes:
- The vocal performance could be much much better (sorry I don't want to sound mean)
- The timing of the guitars is a bit off. In some sections you can hear it a lot and doesn't sound very professional
- The ending was abrupt
- Sometimes I had the impression that the guitars were slightly clipping
- The mix in general was a bit all over the place. No clear separation between instruments. Drums are buried. The bass can't really be heard. The vocals don't cut and the guitars sound mushy.
The video was entertaining though!
If you want I can help you with the mix for free, unless you really want to do it yourself. I think I can help you from that point of view. If you're interested PM and we can discuss details
P.S. You might think "well you covers on youtube sound like balls" and I agree with you!
but the last one was uploaded more than a year ago and I've improved a ton in the meantime.
Let me know
you look like a cool dude to work with