Old 06-13-2015, 06:22 PM   #1
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Default New composition. That's What He Said. Feedback Appreciated.

Feedback appreciated on my latest nonsense.
Put this together tonight.
My brother was round and asking what I got up to of an evening.
Showed him Reaper. He got bored, of course, and buggered off to take some pictures of stuff he wants to sell on ebay.
I carried on and this is the result ....

https://soundcloud.com/landslide-vic...s-what-he-said
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Old 06-14-2015, 01:17 PM   #2
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Lovely track ! I really enjoyed it !!
But think bro' could be right... maybe you need to get out more !!! : )

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Old 06-15-2015, 02:49 PM   #3
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Cheers, Fred.

You may be right, our kid does have more nights out than I.
But working 9 hours a day, 5 days a week, I'd rather relax with a bass line and a melody than a session in the boozer.
For 20 years it was all about the words, the meter and rhythm.
Lyrics and poems. Used to love it.
Dabbled with making music on and off too. Could never get to grips with Cubase in the 90s and not a fan of FL.
Found Reaper a couple of years ago and that was it.

I've been looking online for a tutor, for guidance on how to make better tunes. If only I could find a group of like minded people to create tunes with, like the many friends with whom I can share my poetry.
Lots of open mic nights for sharing verses, no open door for an open DAW night.

I don't want to get out more.

I want to get more out.
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Old 06-15-2015, 03:03 PM   #4
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".........I don't want to get out more.
I want to get more out........"

Hey, nice one Erpers !!
I think an 'Open DAW Night" could be a concept to explore more ....... ?

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Old 06-15-2015, 03:04 PM   #5
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I've just written a verse with
".........I don't want to get out more.
I want to get more out........"

Lyrics come from the strangest places. Who knew a reply to your post would trigger something.
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Old 06-15-2015, 03:06 PM   #6
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lets see/hear it mate......

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Old 06-15-2015, 03:47 PM   #7
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Not quite yet. Got the idea and a few scribbles but I'm not happy with it yet.
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Old 06-16-2015, 01:54 PM   #8
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OK..
Hope it goes well mate !
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Old 06-17-2015, 05:15 PM   #9
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Any other fellow members that would be kind enough to offer feedback/thoughts?
Thanks.
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