Old 08-15-2019, 04:41 PM   #1
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Finally got some time to finish off some songs. Here's one....

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Might be something a bit funky going on with the kick. Feedback appreciated...
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Old 08-16-2019, 06:55 PM   #2
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Quintessential punk music. Well done. Nice fat sound on the guitars and strong confident vocals. I didn't really notice the kick being odd till near the end of the song. On headphones the kick maybe gets a little to loud around 3:40 as the song builds to a climax, and is perhaps compressed a little too much.

Did you consider putting a bridge in the song? Meh... probably not a punk thing to do.

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Old 08-17-2019, 03:53 AM   #3
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Quintessential punk music. Well done. Nice fat sound on the guitars and strong confident vocals. I didn't really notice the kick being odd till near the end of the song. On headphones the kick maybe gets a little to loud around 3:40 as the song builds to a climax, and is perhaps compressed a little too much.

Did you consider putting a bridge in the song? Meh... probably not a punk thing to do.

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Thanks for listening. I usually put bridges in all my tunes...lots of them. But this one kinda lent itself to just keep going straight through
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