I'm the last one to answer these kind of questions but....
listen to the first 30 seconds:
Volume: vocals too low.
EQ: The vocals have no freq's 'sticking out' (this could be really bad english, who cares).
If you listen to the vocals alone EQ wise, does it stand out?
It feel EQ wise boring, meaningless (I MEAN EQ WISE!!!!!)
Love the guitar solo by the way, ENVY