New song - Live recording : Is this good enough?

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`Greetings

It has been a while since I have produced a song. I've been mostly working on writing lyrics, but I decided to record something.

HERE IS THE SONG: https://soundcloud.com/consciousgroo...e-live-version

I hesitated to do this, because the last time I recorded a "live version' the critique was bad, very very bad...

Let me give you the context: I have a small home studio with a very small budget. I need to work very hard In-The-Box to produce a song that will sound meaningful. I enjoy doing this, but once in a while I wish I could simplify the process and record a LIVE song with a SINGLE TAKE.

I have 20+ songs that need to be recorded. I need to simplify the process.

I present to you, for your critique (plz be honest), the most simplified recording possible, a live single take of a song.

How bad is this recording?

How much work is needed?

What do you recommend (keep it simple plz)?

Thank you