Old 10-12-2021, 12:05 PM   #1
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Default Another song for you all from 41TWIN.

Feedback on mix is always welcomed.


It's just a fun little, goofy song we made about my Drummer's dogs.
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Old 10-13-2021, 12:32 AM   #2
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Sounds pretty...you know...quiet!


ps. you forgot the link to your song!
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Old 10-13-2021, 10:32 AM   #3
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LOL. Ooops. Thanks for pointing that out. LOL.

https://41twin.bandcamp.com/track/imissmyzoo
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Old 10-13-2021, 11:55 AM   #4
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Liked this!
I'm also a B52 fan
I think the lead was too dominating except for the very last part.
The different sticks didn't get through.
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Old 10-14-2021, 09:01 AM   #5
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Yeah about the time I was finishing up this song I was like, Oh crap, it sounds like rock lobster a bit. LOL.

What do you mean by sticks getting through? I get what you're saying about the guitar though. Probably could've held back in parts of the song..... It wasn't really the plan to be all focused on the words. But then it might get a bit repetitive.
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Old 10-14-2021, 09:56 AM   #6
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Maybe the wrong word, but all little licks, instrumental and vocal, happening during the song is buried in the mix.
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Old 10-18-2021, 02:02 PM   #7
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Can I ask what you listened to it on? The lead vocals were not done the way I normally do it cuz I'm usually the singer and that was my drummer. He was using an SM57 and i think it was a bit muddier.

I appreciate your comments. I'm still learning how to make it all sparkle better.
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Old 10-19-2021, 09:32 AM   #8
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Maybe I exaggerated a bit
Still some parts like around 'stupid Illnois' and 'I miss my wife', the BV's is too low.
The lead vocal is a bit too loud overall.
There is lots of stuff going on and to make them all be heard is not easy.
I think is a mainly an EQ job.
I listen through AKG headphone.
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