Old 09-12-2017, 08:47 PM   #1
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Default a simple acoustic song

haven't posted here in a while, felt like sharing this one. a little open tuning improv. any and all feedback appreciated.

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Old 09-12-2017, 11:35 PM   #2
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Thanks for sharing! Sounded very nice in my headphones. Really liked the first half. The 2nd half where you slowed it down and added different sounding chords at the end, that seemed like a different song to me, although I get it that you were improvising. Good playing!
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Old 09-13-2017, 06:08 AM   #3
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thanks for taking the time to listen. i know what ya mean about the second half feeling a bit disjointed. thanks!
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Old 09-15-2017, 08:52 AM   #4
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I like it.

I'd like it even more if the guitar was more perfectly in tune.
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Old 09-16-2017, 07:41 PM   #5
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I like the finger-picking and sound.

I don't mind the loud sound of the fingers sliding (sqweekk) on the strings, but there is a background "sssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh" that could probably be reduced?
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I like the finger-picking and sound.

I don't mind the loud sound of the fingers sliding (sqweekk) on the strings, but there is a background "sssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh" that could probably be reduced?
yeah theres a bit of squeeking and squawking on this one. backgroudn noise is a combo of open window + crickets and shitty noisy pc. reminds me that i need to figure out how to fix that problem of my relatively noisy tower...
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Old 09-16-2017, 07:45 PM   #7
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I like it.

I'd like it even more if the guitar was more perfectly in tune.
thanks for listening. this was some weird tuning i just made up (i think i had the 6th all the way down to a b) so i dont doubt the tuning is off.
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