Old 06-13-2013, 11:03 PM   #1
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After a long drought I had to get something out, and this was it.

Production is pretty harsh, and the song is about minute, so yeah. Soup to nuts in a half hour probably.

Any and all critiques still welcome.

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Old 06-15-2013, 03:27 PM   #2
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Well it is a rough demo right? But there is a nice melody/hook in there and the vocals are tuneful and have a sort of laid back intensity (?) that I like. I found the splashy percussion a bit distracting to be honest but I hope you develop it - oh I also liked the tinkley delayed piano at the start which seemed to get lost further on. Maybe that could be the signature sound of the song?
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Old 06-19-2013, 05:17 PM   #3
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Definitely worth working on and doing a proper production with. I'd try to keep this tune no longer than somewhere from 2:30 to under 3:00.

There's some catchy stuff happening here. Are you going to keep going with it?
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