Old 06-05-2018, 03:52 AM   #1
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A new track from the makeaguitarnoise studio.A mystery suspense tune with no ending.Did the angel save her??



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Old 06-06-2018, 03:54 AM   #2
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anyone?what happened to her?
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new improved version with angelic ending.yes its a fine art music making

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I like it. The only thing that caught me off guard is the wispy and whispery sounds (especially the beginning) are a little too crispy in that 8-12k range. Gentle high shelf roll of would fix it if you wanted to mess with it.
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I like it. The only thing that caught me off guard is the wispy and whispery sounds (especially the beginning) are a little too crispy in that 8-12k range. Gentle high shelf roll of would fix it if you wanted to mess with it.
Yes its a little too shrill.Ill have another look at that.thanks
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I dig the song and concept.
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Yeah I dig this song --- I'm a big fan of creativity and this has lots of it.

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Really cool, I enjoyed it a lot! I love a good musical journey.
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thanks for the positive feedback!
As a kid I listened to the Alan Parsons project and in particular this album


It was a great album.Really took you to a different world.
To me its all about trying to paint a picture with sound.Trying to be inventive in a musical way.Of course Im limited musically and each new tune presents me a challenge.
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I like it. The only thing that caught me off guard is the wispy and whispery sounds (especially the beginning) are a little too crispy in that 8-12k range. Gentle high shelf roll of would fix it if you wanted to mess with it.
carried out you suggestion.high shelf roll on the whispers.
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That's definitely better.
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Interesting concept - I always think music should take you on a journey. You may also want to check out Scott Lawlor & Rebekkah Hilgraves conceptual ambient pieces. They have several interesting ones that sound like old radio shows of H.P. Lovecraft stories.

If you're into much darker similar material, try "Urfe" by The Axis of Perdition.
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