This was a great! I think I feel a genuine, touching energy from your relationsship listening to this. Thank you!
I'm no expert, productionwise, but a little more 'in your face', regarding the sound, would perhaps be an improvement. For example the bass, compared to the original's a bit on the weeak side - as I hear it.
But all over... great work, must've taken some time?
Let me know if You want to part with Your wife