Old 09-05-2019, 01:56 AM   #1
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Default 'Gone Tame' - This one goes out to...

...those middle-aged men who may have lost their edge.

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This one is quite a bit different for me.
Slower for a start and with no yelling. Vocals were troublesome...

I've been grinding away trying to get it to sound 'better' but bugger it! Here it is. Got any suggestions?
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Old 09-05-2019, 05:20 AM   #2
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The kick sounds weird, maybe it's just too loud. Sounds like a window sucker being pulled off of the window.

Everything else sounds great I think.
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Old 09-08-2019, 06:03 PM   #3
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Thanks mate, you're right. The kick is a bit funky- I tried to get it to sit with the toms but seems to me that some thump is missing. Couldn't find the time to try fix on the weekend but will do.
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Joy Divison drumming here minus Martin Hannett treatments but has similar effect ,also low guitar does a almost JD style riff a few times,however it does not sound like a JD copy track at all...ok? no I think that's just noticable to a few olds like me.
I had been wondering what you would do with a slower depth track and I really like this...it has been knocking around my head for a few days off and on.
Vocal puts forth feeling.
Nice one!
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Old 09-11-2019, 05:02 PM   #5
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Joy Divison drumming here minus Martin Hannett treatments but has similar effect ,also low guitar does a almost JD style riff a few times,however it does not sound like a JD copy track at all...ok? no I think that's just noticable to a few olds like me.
I had been wondering what you would do with a slower depth track and I really like this...it has been knocking around my head for a few days off and on.
Vocal puts forth feeling.
Nice one!
Not really familiar with those sounds you mention but glad you liked it. Thanks for listening. Now time to get back to some chaotic guitars....
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