Hey man, good job!
Over all it comes across ... even. That is a negative criticism (sorry, I don't want to offend), it just goes and goes. I kept thinking it'd be cool it the guitars stopped and there was a part where the bass and drums grooved together nice and tight ... where things build and ease off kind of thing. With a bit more chordal movements to keep things interesting. The drums are a bit dull too, some EQ and Compression to make them sparkle would add a lot.
I know how hard it is to make all of that happen all by yourself trying to write a song and play everything (I assume that's what you're doing) because this is one of the "mistakes" I make regularly, I call it - everything all the time. Figuring out what to have stop and where and for how long is a tough lesson I'm learning too.
The vocals are low in the mix so it's hard to tell if you benefit from the booth at all, I'm sure it does because that just makes logical sense that it would. But it's not obvious to me as a first time listener.
Good song though man, I enjoyed listening a lot.
Frazer
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