Old 09-19-2020, 03:48 PM   #1
jonlint
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Hi all,

Had some writing block and a busy life so hadn't written anything new for a while. That came to an end today - wrote and recorded this song "All Alone" today. Inspiration is the tragic relationship between Demri and Layne. Feedback most welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/all-alone

ALL ALONE
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

You promised me paradise
Showered me
With sugar and spice
Now you’re gone
There’s a hole in me
‘Till death we’ll part
Then I’m free

Can’t you see
You’re a part of me
Every step I make
You walk with me
Your spirit lives
Inside my bones
Why did you leave me here
All alone

Ay!
All alone
All alone

If only
We could turn back time
Take a dif’rent road
To sublime
Your curse on me
Will ever be
‘Till death we’ll part
Then I’m free

Can’t you see
You’re a part of me
Every step I make
You walk with me
Your spirit lives
Inside my bones
Why did you leave me here
All alone

Ay!
All alone
All alone

SOLO

Can’t you see
You’re a part of me
Every step I make
You walk with me
Your spirit lives
Inside my bones
Why did you leave me here
All alone

Ay!
All alone
All alone…
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Old 09-20-2020, 01:45 AM   #2
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Hi there,

Did a remix and changed the ending - also changed the bass tone and added some different bass parts to make it more interesting:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/all-alone-1
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Old 09-21-2020, 08:51 AM   #3
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Wow... pretty cool... it's like GnR,Ozzy n AiChains rolled into one...😉..dug it
...Mix was nice on my wireless cans...will gv a listen on monitors when i can...thx for sharing
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