Old 04-07-2021, 06:07 AM   #1
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Old 04-07-2021, 06:13 AM   #2
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Sounds great!
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Old 04-07-2021, 09:10 AM   #3
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As Karbo said...Sounds Great!

But I know what you mean about the chorus. To my taste there are just too many melody notes/ words strung together with no pauses, no breath. Maybe remove a couple of words or phrases replaced if necessary with brief guitar flourishes...it's not your voice Abe. FWIW I like it!

And I love the turn around into the solo section...way cool 😎
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Old 04-07-2021, 11:54 AM   #4
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Sounds great! Guitar tone is good. Vocals are good. I hear what you mean about the chorus but I wouldn't worry about it that much. It kind of sucks you into listening to the lyrics more.
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Old 04-09-2021, 10:53 PM   #5
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Sounds really good Abe(?!)

I'm a sucker for a country feel when you least expect it and your chorus doesn't disappoint. I also really like the sort of 70's proto-heavy metal/southern rock feel of the verse section. I hear lots of influences on your writing, all filtered through you. I enjoy it.
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