Old 03-03-2012, 01:59 PM   #1
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Default Need collaboration - anyone inspired (singer etc)

Hey guys - I was wondering if anyone would be inspired to add some vocals/lyrics/melody to this rought draft (only first half of song). I kept it quite bare (and so may well come across as somewhat bland/repetitive) to ensure there's room for vocals. Thing is, my vocals are worse than my playing, so I'm in dire need of someone bringing some spark to the mix!

Not quite sure what style it is tbh. It ain't professional, that's for sure! And excuse the playing.

Anyhoo...if anyone feels inspired and is up for some collaboration, drop me a line.

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Old 03-03-2012, 07:16 PM   #2
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I think people might be more inspired to add some vocals/lyrics/melody if you post the other half as well.

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Old 03-03-2012, 10:08 PM   #3
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Cool!
Nice little progression. Whatcha need?
Melodys and words?
Maybe just a hook chours?

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Old 03-04-2012, 02:13 AM   #4
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I think people might be more inspired to add some vocals/lyrics/melody if you post the other half as well.

Check out:
http://www.kompoz.com
http://ccmixter.org/
Yeh, had thought of that, but sometimes is good to get someone in early when still writing...I'm open to suggested changes, bridge etc.
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Old 03-04-2012, 02:28 AM   #5
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Cool!
Nice little progression. Whatcha need?
Melodys and words?
Maybe just a hook chours?

Bardo
Hey Bardo - Thanks! Definitely melody & words. But, suggestions etc are all welcome too. I can finish the basic structure in the next couple of days and can post it.

Right now it's:

Verse: Em, C, G
Pre-Chorus: Am, B7
Chorus: E, C, B7

At first I had Em in the chorus, but found that E worked better ("opens it up" for lack of a better description)

Still need to think about a bridge.
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