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Old 11-29-2014, 07:24 AM   #1
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Default New song idea "Deaf Ears" - Critique Requested

New song idea "Deaf Ears" - critique requested and welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-lint...-rev1-20141129
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Old 11-29-2014, 12:02 PM   #2
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New song idea "Deaf Ears" - critique requested and welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-lint...-rev1-20141129
Hi,

Here is an improved version - mix wise (hi hat mix less digital, different drums, some more EQ, improved vocals, loader bass).

What do you think?

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-lint...-rev2-20141129
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Old 11-29-2014, 12:42 PM   #3
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...now with 2nd verse:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-lint...-rev4-20141129
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Old 08-12-2018, 09:55 AM   #4
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Hi all,

I did a reboot of an old song "Deaf Ears" - learnt alot since 2014 and my vocals have improved. Here is the updated song - feedback welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/deaf-ears-rev1

DEAF EARS
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Tragedy of justice here I sit
Guilty of a crime I didn' commit
A lazy prosecutor took the easy way out
Skillfully erasing shadow of doubt

My cries and fears, they fall on deaf ears
No one hears, it falls on deaf ears

An eight by ten box is now my home
The crooked prosecutor's free to roam
The wheels of justice ran me over, appeals have been denied
Now I know injustice will preside

My cries and fears, they fall on deaf ears
No one hears, it falls on deaf ears
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