Old 09-08-2019, 10:26 AM   #1
Steve R
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Hi all, I would sure appreciate some comments/suggestions if you have a few minutes. (The track is only 2 minutes long!)

Thanks!

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Old 09-08-2019, 06:38 PM   #2
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Gotta say I like the lyrics. And nice 60's vibe.

Not qualified to comment critically on the mix, but I do think the vocals could be slightly louder relative to the instrumentation.
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Old 09-08-2019, 08:38 PM   #3
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my ignorant opinion.... More dynamics across the length of the song. The lead could be more up front. How to do those things? No idea. It's a nice song and mix.
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Old 09-17-2019, 01:56 PM   #4
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Very nice. Great vocals. I second the suggestion re changing dynamics. Some fader riding throughout as each element seems so keep to its own level. Beyond that excellent work.
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