Old 11-15-2017, 08:22 AM   #1
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Made in Reaper, hope you enjoy it

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Old 11-16-2017, 10:52 AM   #2
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Pro's:
Good song.
Great vocals
Con's
HiHat/Cymbals - Too sharp, loud and noisy.
Vocals - too low
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Old 11-16-2017, 09:02 PM   #3
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very interesting, you have a unique style, that's for sure.

I concur with msundh on the cymbals being too much and the vocal level not enough. You sang it very well and genuine, put those vocals out front. Other than that I liked the beat and the occ special effects you through in.

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Old 11-16-2017, 11:03 PM   #4
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Thanks for your feedback. Any suggestions how to improve vocals and cymbals/hihats? Is it just about volume/level or could an eq do better ? I thought this kind of cymbals dominating the track would give the song a specific character. I do not like using compression too much in order not to loose the dynamics, e.g. guitar no comp at all, but maybe that´s a problem,too ? Maybe I try to attenuate guitars at about 2 Khz with eq to make voice cut through better?!
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Old 11-16-2017, 11:52 PM   #5
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Anyone interested in mixing the whole track ?
I could give you drum, vocal, bass and guitar stems without reverb
and without compression and panning(WAV 16bit)

Would really like to hear some different mix versions.
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Old 11-19-2017, 04:32 AM   #6
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I think this mix might be a little better !?
Have no decent speakers at the moment, so not that easy to make a good mix.


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Old 11-19-2017, 06:16 AM   #7
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3rd version haha last one with hihats and cymbals very low

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Old 11-19-2017, 06:37 AM   #8
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This is so much better.
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