Old 11-18-2017, 09:04 AM   #1
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Default Shine - electronic

https://soundcloud.com/cris_camp/shine

After listening to it again I have to admit that I messed up a little... But if you into atonal music than this is for you

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Old 11-19-2017, 12:37 PM   #2
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That's pretty catchy. Production sounds pretty good to me, and I like the melodies, and the synth patches.

Criticisms would be that it needs a bit more variation. IIWMS I'd probably ditch the chord progression and hang on to one root for 8 or 16, or maybe even 32, at some point in there.

I honestly have no idea where you got the "atonal" thing from. Do you mean that lead that is either heavily detuned or is modulating a half step quickly? Anyway, IMO, you're high.
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