Hi all,
Working on a new song idea after messing around with some cool delay effects in my Kemper. Made a rough take - singing can be better - wanted first to get the idea down. Also, 2nd verse and solo is still pending.
One question also, what genre is this song? Can't pin it to one - impressions on this welcome.
Before I do more, feedback on what I have so far is highly appreciated:
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/sands-of-time
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SANDS OF TIME[/size]
[size=8pt](Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)[/size]
Mountain to climb
And running out of time
Final countdown
Lollygaged around
Only you’re to blame
For what you became
Apathetic soul
Loosing control
A steep cliff, for you to climb
But it’s running, slipping
Through your hands
The sands of time
The sands of time
2nd VERSE
SOLO
A steep cliff, for you to climb
But it’s running, slipping
Through your hands
The sands of time
The sands of time