Old 10-03-2019, 09:40 AM   #1
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Default WASP - Sleeping in The Fire - Blues Version

Here's something done in a slighty different way compared to the original .
Dunno if I did any justice to it ... that I'll leave for You to decide (((:::

Now, any feedback is taken as important as it is .
Won't be doing the vocals anymore though ... except for the ooh - part .

If someone would like to collab I'll share the tracks so far .

All credits to the original songwriters, etc . as always !!!

- Bone -

*.mp3 @ DropBox

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/xy6xts5un...YuqGbF91a?dl=0
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Old 10-03-2019, 11:05 AM   #2
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What were you looking for as far as collaborators go?

I play guitar and a little bass.
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Old 10-04-2019, 07:48 AM   #3
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What were you looking for as far as collaborators go?

I play guitar and a little bass.
Hi ...

Someone else other than myself doing the rhythm and lead guitars ;
in that case I'll redo the vocals (((:::
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Old 10-04-2019, 10:41 AM   #4
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OK. I think I can have something for you this weekend. I'll upload it to my Dropbox and put the link in this post for you.
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Old 10-04-2019, 12:45 PM   #5
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OK. I think I can have something for you this weekend. I'll upload it to my Dropbox and put the link in this post for you.
Hi ...

Here's a ripped mixdown with the guitars omitted ;

Tempo = 85 Bpm and key is E-Minor

https://www.dropbox.com/s/yjctxnkkcb...itars.mp3?dl=0

and I've also prepared a project file for you to start working right on . (:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/eq9fye1fm...aAVRvGila?dl=0

In case the folder can't be downloaded try this one ;

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/eq9fye1fm...aAVRvGila?dl=0

- BOne -

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Old 10-04-2019, 07:17 PM   #6
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Here's something done in a slighty different way compared to the original .
Dunno if I did any justice to it ... that I'll leave for You to decide (((:::

Now, any feedback is taken as important as it is .
Won't be doing the vocals anymore though ... except for the ooh - part .

If someone would like to collab I'll share the tracks so far .

All credits to the original songwriters, etc . as always !!!

- Bone -

*.mp3 @ DropBox

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/xy6xts5un...YuqGbF91a?dl=0
I love WASP!!!

Very nice song. Well done.

Here is my critique:

1) The music, while powerful, is dull
2) The vocal is way way way behind the dull music

I can help.

You need POWER !!!

Your final mix prod = A CREAMY LIFELESS MUSHY song...

Plz ADD MORE MID-HIGH to the vocal track and other tracks, and stop rounding off the mix into a creamy mush. Let some dynamics through to stimulate our emotions...

RE-MIX

I feel like I'm listen to a politically version of a WASP song. That is not good.

You need to go ALL IN = BLOW OUR BRAINS AWAY !!!

We don't need a Creamy Mushy Version...

Not only you need POWER, you need the stereo effect...

In comparison:


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Old 10-06-2019, 12:25 AM   #7
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Hey BlessedOne, sorry man, I may have overextended myself here a bit. Still working on things but it may be a couple of weeks before I have something for you.

By all means, keep looking for other people who can help you with this, don't wait on me.

If anyone else out there can help him out, please do.
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