Old 02-06-2020, 06:43 PM   #1
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Default "For Aroostook" - New acoustic song by Jon Gaither

Just finished this track and would be open to any feedback on the recording or mixing. It's an intimate presentation by design: just piano, guitar, and vocals. Thanks for any listens!

https://jongaither.bandcamp.com/track/for-aroostook
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Old 02-13-2020, 02:35 PM   #2
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I really liked this track but feel like it should've gone somewhere at the end; it built up emotionally but didn't quite arrive at a final point.

Not sure that makes any sense.

Mix sounded effective through my headphones.
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Old 02-16-2020, 12:33 PM   #3
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Glad you enjoyed the song - and yes, I think your critique makes sense. Thanks for listening and offering feedback, it's much appreciated!!
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Old 02-16-2020, 05:45 PM   #4
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I thought you have an interesting voice.
I liked the arrangement instrument wise
Thought you could just be a little more free with you voice however
I would have like "Shun" and "Aroostook" to be more intelligible.
I would go along with Bubble07 too.
The tune has it's charm!

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Old 02-19-2020, 04:47 PM   #5
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Thanks for the helpful feedback, Grinder. Much appreciated!
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