Old 01-16-2023, 03:02 PM   #1
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Default Metal Song - Punisher

https://on.soundcloud.com/Vt3mwb132kRdGtqN7

Let me know what you think.

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Old 01-19-2023, 10:39 AM   #2
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I like it, very nice guitar playing, and the beat is so nice.
Quite dark, and very enjoyable!
Vocals is so good, very clear!
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Old 01-21-2023, 07:34 PM   #3
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I like the production, guitar playing, and song. Very tight, very clean. The vocals, to me, aren't quite right. Not quite intense enough to be over the top. It sort of sits in the middle between two worlds. Just my opinion for whatever it's worth. I think there is another level, but it just hasn't surfaced yet.

Enjoyed the listen!
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Old 01-28-2023, 08:30 AM   #4
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Thanks for listening. I struggle most with vocals. I'd do all instrumentals but most songs I come up with just aren't suitable to just be instrumental.
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Old 02-01-2023, 01:06 AM   #5
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Spiraling to Dystopia: dynamic song, nice guitar work, very
spacious sounding mixed. The drums are super assertive,
but not annoying!

Haja, the vocals are well done - beautifully sung deep. Did
you set it even lower with a pitch shifter, or can you sing
like that? In any case, they succeeded, the phrasing is
great, the volume is right.

In total: It sounds fantastic!
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Old 02-02-2023, 06:35 PM   #6
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Thank you!

That's my actual voice although I double it with another track that's shifted it down 1 semitone to give it some distortion then blend it in. You're being generous calling it "singing" haha.
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Old 02-02-2023, 07:28 PM   #7
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Dig it.

Like your strong bass and lyrics!

Well done.
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Old 02-04-2023, 08:04 AM   #8
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Dig it.

Like your strong bass and lyrics!

Well done.
Thank you!
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Old 02-06-2023, 04:59 PM   #9
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You're being generous calling it "singing" haha.
I don't know, your vocals are getting better all the time.
Practice makes perfect after all


That's why I need a lot of practice hahaha
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I don't know, your vocals are getting better all the time.
Practice makes perfect after all


That's why I need a lot of practice hahaha
If you only knew how much processing I have to go through just to not cringe when I hear myself haha.
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If you only knew how much processing I have to go through just to not cringe when I hear myself haha.
Well, I think I've mentioned how much proccessing I use on my own voice That said last and current project I'm using much less haha
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wow u got a lot of low end in there without sounding muddy. thats impressive!
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Old 02-11-2023, 11:42 AM   #13
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wow u got a lot of low end in there without sounding muddy. thats impressive!
Thanks! Making progress!
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