Old 03-22-2020, 08:04 AM   #1
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Hi all,

New song - different vibe this time, no hard core grunge. Feedback most welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/back-home

BACK HOME
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

You’re on the journey of your life
Wandr’in through darkness
Sometimes in the light

Back in the distance
Just out of sight
Point of departure
A candle burning bright

Winds of change they have blown
But wherever you may roam
Part of you will be
Way back home

Take me back
Way back home
Take me back
Way back home

So sail on buccaneer
Keep overlookin’
Blood that took you here

One day that place
Forgot about
Will be a candle
Flickerin’ out

Winds of change they have blown
But wherever you may roam
Part of you will be
Way back home

Take me back
Way back home
Take me back
Way back home

SOLO

But wherever you may roam
Part of you will be
Way back home

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Old 03-23-2020, 06:40 AM   #2
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Except for the bass sounding a bit "smeary," I really liked this, esp the chorus and the solo sections. Maybe try tightening or narrowing the bass guitar a little more.

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Old 03-23-2020, 09:30 AM   #3
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There's some high pitch ess, cymbal or something sound mostly in the verses
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Old 03-28-2020, 10:55 AM   #4
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Personally it's like listening to a mono track and I'd like some variety in the vocal levels it seems totally compressed. That may be the effect you're looking for but it all sounds samey and flat to me. Not trying to be negative here it's good otherwise.
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