Old 06-17-2018, 10:17 AM   #1
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Hello all!

It feels good to be back


I just wanted to know if I could get some feedback on a new track of mine. Let me know what you guys think..

https://soundcloud.com/lukeswansonmu...reason/s-KDlfp
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Old 06-19-2018, 09:58 AM   #2
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As always, the production is fantastic to my ears. Bass is full, and your manipulation of vocal samples is at once weird and familiar. Vocals sound good, too - appropriate for the material, in key.

The only criticism I have is that if you want it to be "pop," you might consider more lyrics. Personally I love and prefer instrumental music, and I have no problem with minimalistic lyrics, but I don't think I'm a target when it comes to pop music.

Hope that's helpful.
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Old 06-20-2018, 12:42 PM   #3
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Thanks for the Feedback!

Good idea with the vocals. I am trying without covering up (Blurring( the main idea of the track.

I personally like instrumentals as well so i was taking a major leap lol
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Old 06-21-2018, 03:01 AM   #4
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This is fantastic. Sweeet mix!
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Old 06-22-2018, 09:46 AM   #5
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Thanks!

If the mix is okay im thinking of keeping it how it is but changing the middle section.


Ill drop another link soon
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Old 06-22-2018, 10:19 PM   #6
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Wow, really cool track! Great mix of textures and forward thinking production. Enjoyed very much!
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Like! Great job - as always!
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Old 06-23-2018, 11:04 AM   #8
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Sounds full and complete. Nothing about the mix stood out to me.
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Old 06-25-2018, 01:50 AM   #9
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I always enjoy your tracks Luke, cheers.
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Old 07-01-2018, 06:10 AM   #10
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Thanks for all the feedback guys!

I am so glad you people are digging my stuff.

I will for sure finish this and thanks to reaper magic qualities, make it much much better.

Regards,

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