Old 05-22-2018, 01:50 PM   #1
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Default One more Jazz tune to critique mix

One more Wes Montgomery tune.

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Old 05-22-2018, 04:05 PM   #2
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Very crafty performance- well done!

My only critique would be the choice of panning.

You set it up as if, on the stage, the bass and drum are center (hmmm perhaps they are a bit left-ish?) with one comping guitar to the left and a soling guitar on the right.

This is just me, but I could imagine a different stage set up, where the solo guitar is in the middle with the bass on the right and comp guitar on the left. In modern music the bass is almost always in the middle, but in Jazz a bass on the side is perfectly acceptable. I would set the stage this way because the solo guitar is the key attraction of the song - so I would focus the solo guit in the middle.
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Old 05-23-2018, 01:42 AM   #3
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yeah-this is sooo dope!! who don't like a bit of wes!
it's all about the content=qaulity matters not... qaulity is good enough!!
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Old 05-23-2018, 02:52 AM   #4
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road-song-rough-mix-3


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Old 05-23-2018, 01:02 PM   #5
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More guitar, a little less mandolin. Mando was a little tinny, would like to hear more wood. Bass has some nice tones. Maybe a little more bleed between instruments (or reverb, or room sound), a bit too much separation for my tastes. All in all pretty good. What are the instruments and signal chain?
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Old 05-23-2018, 03:20 PM   #6
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