Old 07-18-2020, 01:29 AM   #1
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Below is the link to my new track "The Saddest of Summers". I started writing and recording it part way through the lockdown when the pandemic was at its peak in this country. It started out as a requiem/lament for the pandemic but just now is about a year since a close friend passed away.

http://www.gjcweb.co.uk/music/TheSaddestofSummers.mp3

It's my first go at using strings to any great extent and I think you can tell. However, I got to a point where I thought if I carried on trying to perfect it then I'd never finish it. See what you think : I hope you like it.
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Old 07-18-2020, 08:17 PM   #2
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Yes, You can tell all the instruments are MIDI, but the song is really nice, so it compensates.

I think what hurts it the most is the quantizing.. It's too perfect. especially the piano... It feels a bit robotic. I'd humanize it a bit by not correcting the mistakes too much.

But I really, really like the song though. it's begging for vocals
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Old 07-19-2020, 04:12 AM   #3
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Many thanks for your comment, g4greg.

I'm glad you like you like the track.

I think I'll be using midi for strings for a while due to cost but there may well come a time when I "bite the bullet" and buy a few good sampled instruments. (I'm assuming good sampled instruments will be better than midi)

I'm a real beginner in terms of keyboards and I would be lost without the midi editor. I think I'll explore the "Humanize" function: that would probably be easier for me at the moment.

Thanks, again, for your constructive comments.
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automations are your friend.. you can automate the power of the instrument, and it makes a huuge difference.
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Old 07-20-2020, 08:08 AM   #5
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Thanks for that, g4greg.

I've just looked at a tutorial for the "Humanize" command. Just what I needed!
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