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11-15-2017, 08:22 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 561
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"War in my head" Rock - Pop - Blues - R&B
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11-16-2017, 10:52 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: Sweden
Posts: 2,195
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Pro's:
Good song.
Great vocals
Con's
HiHat/Cymbals - Too sharp, loud and noisy.
Vocals - too low
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11-16-2017, 09:02 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Nov 2008
Posts: 167
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very interesting, you have a unique style, that's for sure.
I concur with msundh on the cymbals being too much and the vocal level not enough. You sang it very well and genuine, put those vocals out front. Other than that I liked the beat and the occ special effects you through in.
Sam
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11-16-2017, 11:03 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: May 2015
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Thanks for your feedback. Any suggestions how to improve vocals and cymbals/hihats? Is it just about volume/level or could an eq do better ? I thought this kind of cymbals dominating the track would give the song a specific character. I do not like using compression too much in order not to loose the dynamics, e.g. guitar no comp at all, but maybe that´s a problem,too ? Maybe I try to attenuate guitars at about 2 Khz with eq to make voice cut through better?!
Last edited by Daniovan; 11-16-2017 at 11:12 PM.
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11-16-2017, 11:52 PM
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#5
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 561
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Mix
Anyone interested in mixing the whole track ?
I could give you drum, vocal, bass and guitar stems without reverb
and without compression and panning(WAV 16bit)
Would really like to hear some different mix versions.
Last edited by Daniovan; 11-17-2017 at 12:43 AM.
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11-19-2017, 04:32 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 561
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2nd mix
I think this mix might be a little better !?
Have no decent speakers at the moment, so not that easy to make a good mix.
https://soundcloud.com/daniovan/war-in-my-head-2nd-vers
Last edited by Daniovan; 11-19-2017 at 04:43 AM.
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11-19-2017, 06:37 AM
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#8
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: Sweden
Posts: 2,195
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This is so much better.
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