Glad to hear your creative streak is back!
I especially like the beginning of the song.
I was taken back a little when the distortion guitar came into the scene. It took over everything and the vocals disappeared. It is perfectly acceptable to have such a big change in dynamics, however I think it could of been really neat if the vocal would of also gone viral (i.e. louder) on us... And by louder vocals I mean intense SCREAMING RAGING LOUD vocals.
Thus the song would go: soft LOUD soft LOUD soft LOUDDDDDDD.
That's just how I'm hearing things. hehehe