Old 06-10-2018, 08:00 AM   #1
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"I Found an Angel" is my May 2018 song. Feel free to give feed back.

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As I look out my window - I can see the sun
I could look up and see - the stars that shine at night
And when I see her eyes - I see all heavens done
I found an angel - much to my delight

Chorus

I found an Angel

With long brown hair and hazel eyes
I found an angel
With a smile that compares with heavens sky
The stars the moon the sun and all the rest
I found and Angel - she fits right in with heavens best



I have walked through a meadow of perfect flowers
I have climbed a maintain - with trees that touch the sky
And when I see your face - I know all heavens power
I found an angel - this I won't deny

Repeat chorus

Now some may say - she’s just not real
I'm just a silly fool who lost his mind
But when she’s in my arms - it's heaven that I feel
That’s enough for me - so it much be them that’s blind
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Old 06-10-2018, 08:24 AM   #2
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Got a real retro British feel from this.. And then read your bio... which seems to fit! Good job!
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Old 06-10-2018, 08:33 AM   #3
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It feels like all the music was played by a robot. If this is the sound you are going for then fine, but I think a more human approach to the instrumentation would compliment your vocals better.
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Old 06-11-2018, 11:37 AM   #4
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A little Beatles, a little Bowie, a little 80 synth pop.
Cool with the cheesy robotic feel
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Old 06-11-2018, 11:49 AM   #5
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Listened to some more,
and I'm a little blown away.
You have this cool attitude in your voice,
and some cool arranging and mixing.
The, something is a little disturbing as well, well the cheesy robotic thing,
and some mix-stuff that's not pleasant.

But, man, you have something going
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