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02-27-2018, 08:17 AM
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Another attempt at rock, and I think I'm getting closer
I've always found rock music way way harder to get sounding right compared to my slow acoustic or piano songs, but I'm pretty pleased with this. I feel like I'm getting closer to getting to sound like a real rock band.
https://soundcloud.com/dreamofsleeping/shadow-play
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02-27-2018, 08:28 AM
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Hello-um..close? bruv you smashed this 1 outta space.now that's oompfy.lively,impactfull production-good stuff (it's not a goto genre-but dayyyn--this hits the spot >here< m8 ((yep that spot right there )) lol)
Well done.
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02-27-2018, 08:43 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Bri1
Hello-um..close? bruv you smashed this 1 outta space.now that's oompfy.lively,impactfull production-good stuff (it's not a goto genre-but dayyyn--this hits the spot >here< m8 ((yep that spot right there )) lol)
Well done.
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Thank you so much! That was awesome to read.
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02-27-2018, 09:12 AM
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Location: Charleston, SC
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Super job. You definitely are tight. Really good sense of balance and limiting.
I would push the vocal performance more though.
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02-27-2018, 09:28 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Coachz
Super job. You definitely are tight. Really good sense of balance and limiting.
I would push the vocal performance more though.
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Thank you! I might try and re-do the vocals at some point. I might add more harmonies as well.
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02-27-2018, 10:14 AM
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Love the guitar tones and the arrangement. Once I heard a harmony part, I found myself wanting to hear more harmonies. And/or maybe a doubled vocal, or a delay on the vocal? $0.02
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02-27-2018, 10:19 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by dave_t
Love the guitar tones and the arrangement. Once I heard a harmony part, I found myself wanting to hear more harmonies. And/or maybe a doubled vocal, or a delay on the vocal? $0.02
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I'm singing harmony parts in my head now so I will have a go at them tomorrow. Thanks.
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02-27-2018, 10:35 AM
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This was good, real good!!!
Some guitars behind the rythm could be louder, the main guitars wider, but...
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02-27-2018, 11:07 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by msundh
This was good, real good!!!
Some guitars behind the rythm could be louder, the main guitars wider, but...
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Thanks!
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02-27-2018, 11:51 AM
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That was awesome to read.
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^M8- i know talent when i hear it--your cloud is really really impressive.. which area do you hail from?
You know,can honestly say_ you invoked many emotions-i'm instantly a fan. =)
This image kinda describes some of what you bring out in me--(less of the reds ) for that--> ithankyou v.much!
*Exe*ceptional imo
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02-27-2018, 12:06 PM
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Thanks so much! That means a lot to me. I'm from Melton Mowbray in England.
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02-27-2018, 12:18 PM
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^ melton mowbray is truly a blessed place with your presence...just passed that way couple of weeks back heading to the highlands... man i missed ya!!
Please continue the great work-- i reckon it's actually aknowledged on many more levels than we 'see'.
All the very best in line of duties...hope to catch some realtime experiences 1 day!! =)
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02-27-2018, 12:26 PM
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The 63.2 godzillion dollars question is= "1 take?"
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02-27-2018, 12:43 PM
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Originally Posted by Bri1
The 63.2 godzillion dollars question is= "1 take?"
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I'm not following you. Is what one take? Usually my stuff is not one take though!
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02-27-2018, 01:19 PM
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just lie and say......yeah, i'm that good. 1st take masterpiece !
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02-27-2018, 05:54 PM
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Sounds great! Could definitely see some vocal harmonies working, but it sounds great as-is.
Can I ask what your vocal fx chain looks like?
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02-27-2018, 06:43 PM
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Heh-that's ok,coz i'm following you. yes,i meant if your able to do recording passes 1st time round,1take,almost every time--your more likely to get signed by a bigger label--great realtime performers are a valued resource i guess..
Great trackings so far imo anywayzzzzz.cheerz.
Whoever done the editing/mixing and programming seems quite adept also...was that you as well Dream Of Sleeping? (artwork is kinda nice also.)
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02-27-2018, 10:33 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Coachz
Super job. You definitely are tight. Really good sense of balance and limiting.
I would push the vocal performance more though.
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This.
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02-28-2018, 04:17 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Bri1
Heh-that's ok,coz i'm following you. yes,i meant if your able to do recording passes 1st time round,1take,almost every time--your more likely to get signed by a bigger label--great realtime performers are a valued resource i guess..
Great trackings so far imo anywayzzzzz.cheerz.
Whoever done the editing/mixing and programming seems quite adept also...was that you as well Dream Of Sleeping? (artwork is kinda nice also.)
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Thanks yes. All the production was done by me.
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02-28-2018, 04:31 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by RDBOIS
This.
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Thank you. Unfortunately vocally it's physically impossible for me to push it any further at the moment because my voice just isn't strong enough, but I'm tyring to build it up more.
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02-28-2018, 07:51 AM
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Location: Charleston, SC
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You shouldn't have to have a real strong voice to add more urgency to the tone. Anyways great job overall
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